Thanks for sharing this world with me Jill. Below is from what i heard and felt with you. This is the kind of thing i was trying to talk about (feel free to amend and extend).
PAUL.
Why is my Eddie dead?
God, you are a father,
you know what's in my head.
You know that I'm rather
upset with things right now,
and I'm not all sure why
'cept I can list aloud
my family who have died,
or are divorced from me,
and I feel left alone.
So I think that you'd see
why I am sad and moan
(that's if I'd let myself),
I norm'lly keep moving,
that's partly for my health,
but you have kept my car in;
can't back out today,
stuck in this piece of land,
so what more can I say
'cause you're forcing my hand.
Well here I am right now
with quite a lonely hand,
help me to groan aloud.
I'm glad you understand,
'cause if you don't you're not
"God" of whom Jesus spoke,
and I know that is rot,
for he would not so joke.
tbc...
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